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Whoa. That performance was, as you mentioned, quite striking. I have a kiddo who happens to be a very early riser haha, so I do this less now, but I still read my prose aloud in an attempt to spot areas that need rhythmic strengthening. More so in later drafts. For me, the first few drafts aren't where that happens; I'm still just sort of finding my way through the dark with those.

Thanks for sharing. Loved reading what you wrote in response to the lesson also.

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